Monthly Archives: February 2009

Johnson Controls: Do Over

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Here are a few reasons I don’t find this ad to be particularly effective, in no particular order:

  1. It’s ugly and yellow.
  2. It’s poorly designed.
  3. The image and the headline don’t tell the reader what the ad is about.
  4. Dirty roots on a plate are off-putting.
  5. The typeface used in the headline doesn’t work in the ad.
  6. The headline doesn’t mean anything.
  7. The copy is written in marketing-speak.
  8. The sentences in the copy are too long, including a 3-line run on sentence.
  9. The second sentence is a phrase.
  10. After reading the copy, I’m still not sure what it is that Johnson Controls actually does.

Weight Watchers Is The Devil On Your Shoulder

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This use of the cookie image in this ad for Weight Watchers is a clever idea. It’s kind of mean, though, because it will send people with eating problems running to the cupboard for cookies. And people with eating problems are the target audience of this ad.

It’s almost like they’re taunting the reader: “You want to eat cookies, don’t you? Go ahead and eat some right now, we’ll wait. Back now, are you? How did that taste, fatty? Don’t you feel bad? Why don’t you call us.”

Kraft Says Macaroni & Cheese is Cheap

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Recently, I talked about how the economy has caused advertisers to shift their message to value. In this ad, Kraft says its Macaroni & Cheese is cheap (“about a dollar a box”) and kids love it. Actually, they say that “everyone” loves it, but they’re clearly focusing on kids in the ad.

They used a child model whose hair is roughly the same color as the macaroni & cheese, which I’m sure was intentional, although the reason escapes me.

I’m not saying that macaroni & cheese is bad for kids. In moderation, there shouldn’t be any problem with feeding this to kids once in awhile. It’s probably healthier than a meal at McDonald’s. But it’s fairly high in calories (410 calories, which, according to the American Heart Association, is 41% of the daily recommended calories for children ages 2-3) , fat (3.5 grams), sodium (580 mg, 58% of the recommended daily sodium for children ages 2-3, according to the Mayo Clinic), and contains a chemical called sodium tripolyphosphate, which in addition to being used as a food preservative, is also

…a solid inorganic compound used in a large variety of household cleaning products, mainly as a builder, but also in human foodstuffs, animal feeds, industrial cleaning processes and ceramics manufacture. STPP is widely used in regular and compact laundry detergents and automatic dishwashing detergents (in powder, liquid, gel and/or tablet form), toilet cleaners, surface cleaners, and coffee urn cleaners. It also provides a number of chemical functions including: sequestration of “water hardness”, enabling surfactants to function effectively; pH buffering; dirt emulsification and prevention of deposition; hydrolysis of grease; and dissolving-dispersing dirt particles.

Source: Wikipedia

Although the FDA recognizes sodium tripolyphosphate as being safe, Wikipedia cites polyphosphates as being “moderately irritating to skin and mucous membrane because of their alkalinity.” Safe or not, why feed this chemical to young children if you don’t have to?

Yes, this product is cheap, but so is macaroni and cheese that you make yourself using whole wheat pasta and low-fat or nonfat cheese.

Vanguard or Water?

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Is this an ad for Vanguard, an investment company, or is it an ad for a water purifier? You decide.

British Airways is Good for a Chuckle

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This ad for British Airways features a New Yorker-style cartoon. I always stop and look at cartoons in ads because I’ll take a good laugh wherever I can find it. The problem is that most advertising cartoons aren’t funny. At best, they’re funny to a small target audience.

This cartoon is kind of funny by itself, but combined with the headline, it’s more humorous:

A COMPLIMENTARY COMPANION TICKET.
A MORE CIVILIZED WAY TO BRING SOMEONE ALONG. 

(We can ignore the fact that although each of these two lines end with a period, neither is actually a sentence.)

The cartoon and the headline are enough to let the reader know what the ad’s about.

Victorinox Travel Gear Asks Who, What, and Where

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All in all, I think this ad for Victorinox Travel Gear is a good one. I say that based solely on the image in the ad, which is so strong that it overcomes the slapdash graphic design. I’d like to see the name of the product placed more prominently. The size and placement of the red Victorinox logo is awkward—maybe it should have been reduced and moved to a lower corner.

Just For Fun: IKEA Commercial

Canon’s Little Big Idea

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I like this ad for Canon Flash Memory Camcorders. It uses a clever method to make its point. They could have pictured an SD memory card between the fingers, but instead, they used text. An SD card would be easy to ignore, but the text all but forces you to read it.

Here’s a detail of the text:

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The copy does a good job of explaining the benefits of using an SD card, although it’s a little wordy. All-in-all, a nice job.

 

TYLENOL WANTSYOUTO FINDTHEWORD

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This ad for Tylenol Children’s Cold is in the form of one of those word find puzzles that some people like to do. Personally, I think word find puzzles are a phenomenal waste of time and when I came across this ad I did what most people would probably do…turn the page.

But let’s look beyond my glib dismissal of this ad. The ad is for people who have kids. Since I don’t have kids, I’m not the target audience. I bet that kids love word find puzzles. Parents probably have spend time helping their kids do this type of puzzle. Since parents see these puzzles all the time, they might be inclined to stop and take a look at the ad.

The parent finds the hidden words in the ad—only they’re not so hidden because they’re in red. Click on the image above and try looking at some of the words and phrases. They relate to colds:

  • Warm Bath
  • Saline Spray
  • Plenty of Fluids
  • etc.

After you’ve spent a minute or two doing this, take a look at the copy under the puzzle. A curious thing happens. Since your eye has spent some time picking out the red letters from the surrounding gray letters, the red words in the copy jump right out at you. That’s where they put the ad’s message:

For colds that come with pain, Children’s TYLENOL Plus Multi-Symptom Cold combines relief for the cold symptoms you can see with the trusted pain relief of Children’s TYLENOL to ease their painful symptoms that may be harder to find.

It’s a bit wordy, but it’s an interesting effect.

IKEA: Yes, But Is It Art?

Sometimes, a one-minute TV commercial can be art. This commercial for IKEA was directed by Martin De Thurah.